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PostSubject: Re: [comments] Seasoning   [comments] Seasoning - Page 2 Icon_minitimeWed Jul 21, 2010 6:33 am

LOL, turning Jun gay, I was completely thrown off by that...never expected it, which means that the way you wrote Jun's character until he revealed himself to Nino was VERY well thought out and full of hints I still can't pick up; it worked for the story.

I liked the way you wrote Nino's inner dialogue and conflictions. Overall a very good read! I hope you write some more stories... ;)
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